ok here's chapter 2!!!

chapter 2

the copier hummed as it scanned the pages. it rolled out a clean sheet of crisp, white, printer paper, then started vibrating as the ink block moved back and forth across the new page. stardustglanced around nervously to make sure that no one was within hearing range. after the machine finished, Stardust crept up to her room to begin studying.

several hours later, Stardust woke with a start. she blinked slowly as she raised her head.then she heard what had woken her so suddenly. her eldest sister, Ursa, and her sister's husband were in the entryway right below stardust's room, talking to her parents. stardust shoved the answer key to friday's math test in the back of her binder and tore out of her room. she ran downstairs and tackled mike in a bear hug. out of the corner of her eye, stardust noticed 2-year-old luna and 4-year-old stella looking at them curiously. ursa had been 21 when stella was born and 23 when luna was born. now, at 25, ursa was married and had 2 kids, penny and kyle, with another on the way. stardust jumped up to answer the door.

(end of chapter)

ok, i know, it needs work! does anyone have any better ideas for ursa's name? it has to do with like stars and planets...
ok and any ideas on how i should rework the last sentence? i need your ideas!!! please comment!!!!!

-macky:)