ok here is chapter 2!!!!!

chapter 2
Dawn

the wind was howling through the trees. the leaves rattled like thousands of voices crying out at the cold. Dawn shivered and tried not to feel the icy chill creeping down her spine. she ran as fast as she could through the frozen heather to a small cottage glowing with light through the sleet. the gray cottage, sunken deeply in soft earth, had stood there as long as dawn could remember. she burst inside, slamming the door behind her. "dawn, is that you?" her mother called from a back room. dawn sighed and trudged back outside to get another bucketful of water for her chores.

ok here it is!!!

chapter 1
Bree

The waves crashed on the Irish sea cliffs far below where Bree was standing. She turned her head slightly to the left, and out of the corner of her eye she could see arawen, her snow white horse running free through the patch of shamrocks. As Bree watched, arawen jumped over a fallen tree with graceful ease, like a deer jumping over a brook. She smiled. As she turned back to the cliffs, Bree heard the sounds of distant thunder. Across the sea, she could just barely see Cathay's sister island, a green jewel in the midst of a stormy gray sea. A white seagull swooped out across the bay, disappearing in the distance as the evening mists moved in and the sun dipped low behind the oncoming storm clouds.

ok this is my new blog...
each week i am going to blog a new chapter of my story, and you all can comment on it and be my editors! sound cool or what? i dont know what the title is going to be so i need some suggestions...
i dont have the chapter written yet but when i do i will blog it!!!!
TTFN!!!!!!
-Mgirl